TOWIE Parody roughcut.

Audience Feedback

Constructive Criticism

• The sound needs turning up at the part where we are in the car.
• Non diegetic song needs turning down so the speech of characters can be mroe clearly heard
• 'I think the trailer was really funny and entertaining and the song suited the trailer, but it could have been edited better to fit the cuts so it didn't give the right connotations' - Luke Wainhouse

We took this feedback on the non diegetic song and edited it in 'GarageBand' on the Apple Macs, to fit with the cuts in the trailer. And ducked the sound so that you were able to hear the dialougue of the characters.

• 'It doesn't have any title cards so i didn't know what channel its on or the branding of the programme' - Jack Kane

So i had to go into 'Key Note' on the Macs to produce an E4 styled title card, using the E4 styleguide on teh internet to help me do it.